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First of all, I've never done a critique before, so I hope I'm not too horrible.
For the "vision" aspect, you did well and I like how you placed everything in the painting, but you could perhaps add colors that are lighter than the darker ones so that it's easier to understand, path-wise (you know, how the eye is directed from one thing to the next). The "originality" is good as well, however I didn't give a complete five star score because I've seen other paintings and drawings similar to this idea. "Technique" was executed well too, although I would have given the hand at the bottom more depth than just a flat black color. And for the face, I feel that you could have smoothed out the lines, but this was probably your intention, so I scored you high anyways. As for "impact", I felt that I could relate to this piece and think that everyone should at least be able to imagine themselves in a similar situation if they want to truly understand how the artist is feeling. The title does indeed capture the mood of the picture, since the person looks unsure. The creepy hands coming up from behind her also help add to the mood since they look as though they are going to pull her into a deep and dark pit of doubt. Anyways, i hope this was somewhat helpful and have a lovely day! ;D
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Absolutely in love with this artwork. The stark contrast between the black and the white creates a dark and gloomy feel, with the glimmer of red alluding to feelings of anger, rage and love. Her face portrays troubled feelings, with the lines flowing from her back conveying both a futuristic theme, as well as the idea of her soul being externally connected. This image is technically perfect and the use of blank space really is effective and adding a background would surely ruin the feel of the image, so great job there. This is a very inspiring piece, great work.
Cheers, J. Pulo
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longhairedartist Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2017
3 guesses why I like this one ;) 
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Izha-Caeli Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Doubt. The killer of dreams. The master manipulator and belittling backstabber. The dark power that fiddles with emotions and drains out their light. The wolf in sheep's clothing. The coward on the battlefield. The suspect behind all suspects. Yet, there he goes — unpunished.
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MauricioDuarte Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016  Professional General Artist
Mysterious and simbolic artwork that envolves the watcher on shadows and hair of the woman.  I liked it very much.
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much, I'm happy that you liked it :happybounce: Hug 
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Ihidefromsanity Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016  Student General Artist
salut!!....I really love you draw (sorry for bad englesch) your amazing
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much for the kind words!! ) It's okay, I uderstand you ) 

Have a great day ^^ 
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Violin23 Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think your drawings are very expressional and skillful. I hope to see many more of your artwork in the future. ^_^
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much, I will try! 
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Violin23 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Natsu and Happy (Thumbs Up) [V1] 
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bluehorse-rmd Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2016
Simple and poignant
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bakalobo Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Your worl is amazing! Thanks for the fave 
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RaymondEternal Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
We as humans will always have doubts yet This work is completely majestic without any doubts ^_~
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Isma3ilMiah Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist
wow this is brilliant!!!!!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much!!^^ 
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PauloMazzoco Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2016
amazing!!!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you! )) 
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DravenRavenCrow Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016
It makes me wander in the recesses of my being. Into my deepest fears  and night mares. Reminds me of why I am alive and wanting to still live .
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you for the interesting and atmospheric comment, I always appreciate it! 
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DravenRavenCrow Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016
u r very welcome 
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shieldslinlin Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I Identify with this illustration, I have been this woman to many times in my life. I like the depth of it....very well done! :)  Find your passion...and never let go!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much for the your comment! Love 
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skeletonjess Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Student Digital Artist
You're honestly so talented!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you cery much! It means a lot to me! 
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skeletonjess Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
No problem!
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NorthwestPurity Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, the strings of doubt which bind us and haunts us long afterward, and that grab and tear at us, stealing our joy. Her expression is but a hollow of who she once was, and the red tint beautifully symbolizes the self-crippling pain of doubt. Wow. I also like how her face seems normal, where the rest of her is not, speaking of how we may appear okay or normal on the outside, even as we are suffering from a disfiguring doubt inwardly.

Thanks for the wonderful piece again, tsukiko. :)
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you, my dear friend, for the always wondeful, interesting comment! I always adore reading your comments! Heart 
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NorthwestPurity Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Blush emoticon  You're very welcome.  Little Pixel Heart 
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DanielleMunroe Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love this, looks amazing
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you )) 
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Moca13 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist
Cool :)
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ollie2008 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice work
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you ) 
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ollie2008 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Most welcome.
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morquee Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it :)
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you, friend!^^ 
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FrancesArcher Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
wondeeeer La la la la 
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!*_* 
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FrancesArcher Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
:happybounce: 
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nooshafarin6 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016
dark but beautiful
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!^^ 
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anime1999 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fantastic  art pice 
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much ) 
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CarmenVE Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I told you
your art is wonderful :love:
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much ^^ 
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CarmenVE Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome x3
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10-dave1 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 6, 2016
Magnificent my friend,this creation is my favourite of yours,I salute youHug Airborne 
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much, friend! I'm glad that you liked it )) 
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Pr0teusUnbound Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
this seems darker than usual
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
maybe, thanks! 
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IrianWhitefox Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2016  Professional Interface Designer
So awesome!
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