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Shattered Thoughts by tsukiko-kiyomidzu Shattered Thoughts by tsukiko-kiyomidzu
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Yay im the first one ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ )

i really like the many diffrent colors that you have used because they are not interfering with themselves.
The Face is really skillfully painted and detailed.
Mouth, eyes, eyebrows especially.
The body pose looks also natural as well as the turned neck.
The eyes a symetric although they are looking to the side, rly great job.
The Title shattered thoughts is very reprensented in the picture because it was what i was thinking when i saw it without reading the title.
The only thing which i have maybe would have done diffrently are the thoughts,
they are to static compared to the rest of the image in my opinion :)
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Everything about this is just entirely lovely. The eyes and lips are especially great to me, you did great in getting the detail in. The sharp edges of the "thoughts" contrast nicely to the curves of the persons face and body. I would say though that the person does not seem entirely proportionate. The angle the body is at can be hard to capture and sometimes with poses like this they do not transfer exactly to paper and need to be exaggerated some to appear proportionate. I think the colours on the body and face could have been a touch softer or even a little more monotone to really make the colours in the shatter pop out but still works great as is. Over all though this is just a fantastic piece.
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PJM74 Featured By Owner May 29, 2017
Amazing visual ... 
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AliDee33 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the use of color, and the painterly artistic look of this. I love the meaning behind it and the title.
I'd love to look through some more of your work, as from this picture- I can tell you have much talent!! Well done!!
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WeronikaB Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!^^ 
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FractalMonster Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017
So well illustrated :clap:
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you )) 
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FractalMonster Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
My pleasure :)
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JaymeBug Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Yummy use of color! Very provocative.
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much *_* 
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zibus Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017
I love your color. Awesome.
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you very much :)
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jminsart Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2017  Student Artist
I love the colors that you used! Brilliant work!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzu Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you soo much! )) 
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Psychopath0507 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017
I love your colors and the expression on her face.
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proximafermata Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017
love it.
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crazygardener Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017
Cool!! very pretty colors!!!
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echo911x Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017
I am generally into this type of art but I have to admit it caught my attention. At first I thought it was so simple but then the more I look at this I can see the complexity. I love the variables and the mixed colors. The details are incredible. I know you prefer critique on your art but I can't find anything bad to say about this piece. I am actually very impressed.
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SpreadYourWingsCover Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Love the colors :D
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Acrolyth Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017  Professional Artisan Crafter
Beautifully done!
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RobMitchem Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That's marvellous! I really like this one.
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Ururuty Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
cool colors
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flying-never-fallen Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this!
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TristenMajor Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The eyes, lips, and nose look great and each are first to capture my attention respectively. The left shoulder and part of the neck seem a little off.. i would like to see more light and dark contrast.. my eyes jump around looking for a point of focus... The color scheme is beautiful and the face portrays a lot of emotion and I love the amount of detail.. all in all this is a very artistic and amazing painting keep up the awesome work hope I wasn't too harsh this is my first time ever doing a critique!
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lily1oo18 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!!! Brilliant Clap 
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negriwtf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
another fantastic hyper-duper draw made with your name it's only perfect!!!
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4IeafCLOVER Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the idea of the large color variation, which may represent many different thoughts. 
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farek18 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Full colors, full emotions! 👍
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anime1999 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gorgeous art design
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Gmatty Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
Wonderful emotion!
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jayDontae Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
This is great! Beautiful contrast between white and colours Love 
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montag451 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Another amazing artwork, Alexandra--love it!Nod Heart 
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AdamWRodriguez Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Awesome.
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CarmenVE Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That beautiful faces that you doHeart Love Heart Love Heart Love Heart Love congratssssss Heart 3D Heart 3D Heart 3D 
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Katong999 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice Sanji OP Icon 11 
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